I like the length but really want to see more within that time. What about a montage of shots dissolving quickly from one to another with minimal camera movement and tight on just the action? Or is it the camera movement you like best?
I'd like to see:
Alley shot opener without camera movement. We see the cat run out of the image then dissolve to:
Shot of Ruby swinging across alley. Dissolve to:
Shot of Ruby listening to guys with guy tied up:
Shot of Ruby leaning on lamp with no camera movement
Blows smoke to intro.
What do you think?
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